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Virginia Resolves
I added dates and accounts of the actual proceedings that day in the house. I was just wanting a review, mainly on grammar skills and some advice on more things I could add.
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Kubigula
It's an enjoyable article to read - I really like the use of the quotations from the proceedints. The biggest problem with the article is that it does not cite any of its references; that should definitely be the priority for improving the article. In terms of content, I think there should be a bit more about what was in the resolutions that did pass - there is more said about the ones that didn't pass (though admittedly the ones that didn't pass may have been more important).--Kubigula (talk) 05:21, 22 January 2007 (UTC)