Wiki143:Editor review/Geekamalloy

Geekamalloy

I got here from the community portal and I wanted to know what fellow users thought about me and my contributions. Geeky Malloy 02:29, 9 June 2008 (UTC)

Reviews

• review by Dlohcierekim Clinton Kelly (minister)-- not bad editing for a beginner. In the cite, you should put more compete info--- [URL History of the Pacific Northwest: Oregon and Washington. Portland, Oregon. North Pacific History Company, 1889. on Ancestry.com. Online. Date accessed.] Unfortunately, there does not appear to be an assertion of notability. Please review WP:N and WP:BIO. It would be good to set your preferences so the software will require you to complete the edit summary. Communication is important. When reverting vandalism, it is important to warn vandals. There are templated warnings that make this easier at Wikipedia:Template messages/User talk namespace. Hope this helps, cheers. Dlohcierekim 03:44, 9 June 2008 (UTC)

• review by GeorgeLouis (talk) 02:46, 16 June 2008 (UTC). I haven't done much checking of your work but in PB2Y Coronado, you have this sentence: "The PB2Y Coronado was a large flying boat patrol bomber designed by Consolidated Aircraft. As of 2005, one Coronado remains at the Pensacola, Florida National Museum of Naval Aviation." Remains should be remained, since it was in the past. I will look over your stuff from time to time, since I really like your username. Sincerely, GeorgeLouis (talk) 02:46, 16 June 2008 (UTC)

In Khartoum you made the same error — using the present tense instead of the past. Also you introduced a spelling error. If you need to, why not do your editing in a word-processor that has a spell-check, then just paste in? Here is what you wrote:

On 10 May 2008 the Darfur rebel group of the Justice and Equality Movement moved into the city where they engaged in heavy fighting with Sudanese government forces. Their goal was the topeling of Omar Hassan al-Bashir's government, though their success as of 12 May and damage to the city is not known. You need a comma before where; should be toppling, not topeling'; should be was not known not is not known. Sincerely, GeorgeLouis (talk) 02:57, 16 June 2008 (UTC)

That was a good catch in Frontier Corps, but in the note you wrote grammer, not the correct grammar. GeorgeLouis (talk) 03:04, 16 June 2008 (UTC)

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Questions

1. Of your contributions to Wikipedia, are there any about which you are particularly pleased, and why?

   I am pleased with my Clinton Kelly (minister) article and my anti-vandalism efforts.

3. Have you been in any conflicts over editing in the past or do you feel other users have caused you stress? How have you dealt with it and how will you deal with it in the future?

   No. If I had a problem I would just work it out with the user. Even in real-life I rarely get mad at my peers. I just talk it out with them.