Talk:Veterans of Foreign Wars
Latest comment: 15 March 2025 by OneHoopyFrood in topic This sounds like it was copied from an advertising publication
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This sounds like it was copied from an advertising publication
This should be edited to remove "your" as this would assume the reader is a VFW member or veteran:
"The VFW's National Veterans Service program consists of a nationwide network of VA accredited service officers and pre-discharge representatives who are experts in dealing with the VA and are the key to your success."
Also, as it appears to be from a pitch, should be edited to have a neutral tone. OneHoopyFrood (talk) 23:51, 15 March 2025 (UTC)