Talk:Pikachu
Latest comment: 23 August 2024 by David Fuchs in topic Followup to GA
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Semi-protected edit request on 24 April 2024
Script error: No such module "protected edit request". let people edit. GRDAS (talk) 13:26, 24 April 2024 (UTC) Talk:Pikachu/GA1 Talk:Pikachu/GA2
Followup to GA
The article is looking better, but there's still some remaining issues.
- Redundancy and overlinking still a problem throughout (most egregiously: In the 2019 film Detective Pikachu, a detective Pikachu is voiced by Ryan Reynolds. For the 2019 live action film Detective Pikachu, the titular character was portrayed by Ryan Reynolds. but also in repetitious prose Originally after evolving into Raichu, Raichu or Super Smash Bros getting mentioned in the overview and then again later as if it hadn't been mentioned already. We get multiple repetitious "Critic X said [this thing that's the same as critic Y]" that gets old fast and should probably get condensed.
- If the idea is to have an overview, then go into appearances, and then go back to development, I think it needs a rethink. Right now development info of the character is split across all three sections.
- Still improperly and inconsistently-formatted refs, such as 36, 45, and 106. Citations using Template:Tl should probably use Template:Tl to match the Template:Tl formatting.
--Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs talk 18:40, 23 August 2024 (UTC) Talk:Pikachu/GA3