Talk:Pikachu
Latest comment: 23 August 2024 by David Fuchs in topic Followup to GA
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Semi-protected edit request on 24 April 2024
Template:Edit semi-protected let people edit. GRDAS (talk) 13:26, 24 April 2024 (UTC) Talk:Pikachu/GA1 Talk:Pikachu/GA2
Followup to GA
The article is looking better, but there's still some remaining issues.
- Redundancy and overlinking still a problem throughout (most egregiously: Template:!xt but also in repetitious prose Template:!xt or Super Smash Bros getting mentioned in the overview and then again later as if it hadn't been mentioned already. We get multiple repetitious "Critic X said [this thing that's the same as critic Y]" that gets old fast and should probably get condensed.
- If the idea is to have an overview, then go into appearances, and then go back to development, I think it needs a rethink. Right now development info of the character is split across all three sections.
- Still improperly and inconsistently-formatted refs, such as 36, 45, and 106. Citations using Template:Tl should probably use Template:Tl to match the Template:Tl formatting.
--Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs talk 18:40, 23 August 2024 (UTC) Talk:Pikachu/GA3