Talk:Massimo Ellul

References

Could the author of the article (or anyone knowledgeable) please use the <ref> tags to indicate which reference is used with each section of this article? Help in referencing can be found here at WP:REF. Thanks. ~ ► Wykebjs ◄ (userpage | talk) 18:21, 12 February 2007 (UTC)

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The article is too promotional and should be more objective. It should strive to provide a more balanced and neutral perspective on Mr. Ellul's career and contributions. I also observed that there are some grammatical issues, such as missing commas and run-on sentences, which can make it difficult to read and understand. Also, it uses a mix of citation styles, making it appear disorganized. A consistent and proper citation format should be used for clarity and credibility. Jkyem24 (talk) 23:11, 23 October 2023 (UTC)