Talk:American Dream
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Informality decreasing objectivity
This section "In America, you can tell who has achieved the American Dream if you can see how wealthy they are. Someone's status in America is shown through their wealth." seems very informal, and makes the article seem biased and unreputable. MGJohn-117 (talk) 06:55, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 30 May 2024
Script error: No such module "protected edit request". In section See also there is the entry (the last) "new dream" this seems to be a random NGO that is not related to the article and is probably just there for SEO and credibility. I would suggest removing them for a more object and non commercial pov. Scarlett Samantha Verheul (talk) 05:52, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
- File:Pictogram voting question.svg Question: Which NGO? ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 05:59, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
- File:Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 11:30, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
Opening paragraph
In the opening paragraph it states:
The second of these sentences cites an article by Sarah Churchwell at the Bush Centre, in which she also states (my emphasis):
So could the second sentence please be edited to include the fact that the origins of the phrase are from the original "American Creed" (a creed which is not mentioned anywhere in the Wikipedia article, BTW)?
Thank you very much. 77.44.48.159 (talk) 09:31, 21 October 2024 (UTC)