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==Untitled==
Is there any way we can find out the value of b theoretically if the value of radius of nucleus is known

and if there is any way of caluculating a plz do write

:Yes, there is, but you will need heavy-duty [[quantum physics]] and a lot of computational power to get reasonably good answers. By the way, the [[atomic radius]] is considerably bigger than the size of the [[atomic nucleus]]. -- [[User:Karada|Karada]] 08:20, 1 Sep 2003 (UTC)
:The van der Waals equation is really only an approximation valid at the macroscopi levels... not sure why you would want to bother using it at the subatomic level. [[User:yosofun|yosofun]] 00:25, 7 Mar 2004 (PST)

== Changed notation ==

I changed the notation for the formulas to the form more familiar to me of lower case ''p'' for pressure and lower case for per-particle properties. Hence ''v'' for volume per particle (specific volume), and ''V'' for total volume; ''N'' for total number of moles (or particles) rather than ''n'' which is used for the number density of molecules (number of particles per unit volume: ''n'' = 1/''v'' = ''N''/''V'', if ''N'' is the total number of particles)(or ''n'' = ''N x Na'' / ''V'' if ''N'' is the total number of moles, and where ''Na'' is [[Avogadro's number]]).
*Tom Lougheed 2005-09-27

==The equations at the top need fixing==
Those equations need cleaning - first and foremost: same variables should not have different meanings.  [[User:Fresheneesz|Fresheneesz]] 08:21, 21 November 2005 (UTC)

:Looking at it quickly, the only problem I see is lowercase p and uppercase P both being used for pressure. Did you see others? [[User:PAR|PAR]] 13:58, 21 November 2005 (UTC)

::I think I fixed it [[User:Alex Bakharev|abakharev]] 23:19, 21 November 2005 (UTC)

:Does anyone mind if we have the convention N=number of particles in the system, V=volume of the system, and v=V/N = volume per particle, without introducing the concept of the mole and Avogadro's number? I will do the changing. [[User:PAR|PAR]] 03:57, 22 November 2005 (UTC)
::There won't be R (gas constant) then, just NkT, if it is OK with you, guys, it is OK with me [[User:Alex Bakharev|abakharev]] 04:50, 22 November 2005 (UTC)

== Error in v<sub>C</sub>==

:Should not kTc=8a/27b read NkTc=8a/27b ? [[User:Jhaagsma|Jhaagsma]] 09:25, 26 February 2007 (UTC)

::No, I think the problem is that the equation for <math>v_C</math> is wrong. I fixed it. Please check and see if you agree. Thanks for noticing the inconsistency. [[User:PAR|PAR]] 17:03, 26 February 2007 (UTC)

:::Are you sure the new equation is correct?  If <math>v_C</math> is supposed to be the critical specific volume, dividing <math>b</math> by Avogadro's number gives a really tiny answer for it.  Sorry, I've probably misunderstood the meaning of <math>v_C</math>. [[User:84.12.252.210|84.12.252.210]] 15:40, 18 July 2007 (UTC)

:::: <math>v_C = 3b'\,</math>.  Note the prime on ''b''! This indicates a molecular (not a molar) quantity. If you  divide ''b'' by ''N'',  nothing happens to v<sub>C</sub>.--[[User:P.wormer|P.wormer]] 15:53, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
I've added a derivation of this equation which involves no calculus, and thereby show that the change from Nk to R is because it should have been  <math>N_{Avogadro}k</math>  <small><span class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Wpd0101|Wpd0101]] ([[User talk:Wpd0101|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Wpd0101|contribs]]) 15:37, 8 July 2015 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

==Change title of article to 'Van der Waals equation of state'==
'Van der Waals equation of state' is a more accurate description of this article and so I think it should be moved. [[User:Wiki me|Wiki me]] 15:47, 18 March 2007 (UTC)

:The proper title should be "Van der Waals gas" [[Special:Contributions/68.104.13.242|68.104.13.242]] ([[User talk:68.104.13.242|talk]]) 11:27, 8 September 2022 (UTC)

== 1st equation? ==

The article states: '' v is the volume per particle of the fluid in the 1st equation;''. Questions: (i) is the volume per particle ''v'' not the same as the total volume ''V''? Both are the volume of the vessel, I would think. (''V-b'' is the volume '''available''' to a particle). (ii) What is the 1st equation? (iii) Does anybody object if I start working on this article? <small>—The preceding [[Wikipedia:Sign your posts on talk pages|unsigned]] comment was added by [[User:P.wormer|P.wormer]] ([[User talk:P.wormer|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/P.wormer|contribs]]) 15:51, 9 May 2007 (UTC).</small><!-- HagermanBot Auto-Unsigned -->

Sorry for forgetting to sign previous comment. I reworked the article. Extended the derivation (actually gave two derivations), and checked the notations. These didn't match well, I hope I have the notation correct now and matching. I kept <math>\,a'</math> and <math>\,b'</math> as ''molecular'' variables (as they were in the original article). The corresponding ''molar'' variables are <math>\,a</math> and <math>\,b</math>.--[[User:P.wormer|P.wormer]] 11:53, 15 May 2007 (UTC)

== changes by    218.223.87.142 ==

I don't like to get into edit wars, but the changes by this anonymous are so strange that I felt compelled to revert to my own last version. The anon introduced the following sentence in parentheses:

:(The number of "edge" molecules is proportional to n/V and the number of interior molecules is proportional to n/V also. The number of pairs of interacting molecules is thus proportional to n2/V2 so that the forces attracting the edge molecules to the interior are proportional to n2/V2. These forces give an additional contribution to the pressure on the gas proportional to n2/V2. from http://www.chem.arizona.edu/~salzmanr/480a/480ants/EQNOFST/states.html) 

Edge molecules are not yet defined. What is n2? What is V2? Why a link to a website in the middle of a derivation? I will accept it if somebody improves/shortens the phrasing of this proof, but this is not it.--[[User:P.wormer|P.wormer]] 07:41, 16 May 2007 (UTC)

And two more things: (i) I took great care to follow IUPAC in distinguishing ''n'', ''N'', and ''N''<sub>A</sub> and also ''v'', ''V'', and ''V''<sub>m</sub>. This went unnoticed by 218.223.87.142. (ii) The argument about the layer molecules is very subtle and took the genius of Laplace to discover it. It is not a matter of simple (N/V)<sup>2</sup> pairs. The number of pairs of interacting molecules per volume is ''N''<sup>2</sup>/''2V''. --[[User:P.wormer|P.wormer]] 09:45, 16 May 2007 (UTC)

:Good that it's removed. It's a direct quote from a copyrighted page. Yes, it's attributed, but text written from the ground up "organically" on Wikipedia is many times preferable to cut and paste from copyrighted material. Invoking copyright issues often makes resolving edit wars easy. --[[User:HappyCamper|HappyCamper]] 03:34, 23 May 2007 (UTC)

== reversal ==

I reverted  the change of 09:12, 8 June 2007 by 212.192.238.23. This anonynomous removed about half of the article without any explanation. Such a drastic edit needs some motivation! Although risking an edit war, I decided to go one step back (to the version of 18:47, 26 May 2007 by JAnDbot).--[[User:P.wormer|P.wormer]] 07:53, 8 June 2007 (UTC)

== I make my apologies ==
[[User:212.192.238.23|212.192.238.23]] 08:14, 9 June 2007 (UTC)

I' sorry for unintentional deletions. I would like only to fix the second equation, which has inconsistensy in the definitios (not all quantaties were in per-mole based units). No deletions were assumed.

== Fluid? ==

Why is the whole article referring to fluids when the van der Waals equation is used to calculate the pressure of gases? Maybe I am just not aware that one can use this equation for liquids as well, although the fact that R (ideal gas constant) is used and that the equation is a modification of the ideal gas equation makes me doubt that there is any application to liquids. If I am correct then perhaps using just gas instead of fluid would be a good change, since fluid can easily be interpreted as liquid as well as gas. [[User:Aurimas|Aurimas]] 09:46, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
:It appears I was incorrect. These equations do apply to liquids. My apologies, please ignore the above comment.

:Actually an interesting question is, when exactly does a fluid change from a liquid to a gas?  In the case of a first order phase transition the answer is clear--the change happens at the phase boundary.  However, above the critical temperature, Tc, we can have a second order transition where there is essentially a smooth transition from a liquid to a gas with no clear boundary between the two.  In general, we would just refer to this as a van der Waals fluid to avoid the difficulty. [[User:Jtepper|Jtepper]] ([[User talk:Jtepper|talk]]) 05:47, 18 November 2009 (UTC)
[[User:Aurimas|Aurimas]] 20:22, 10 September 2007 (UTC)

== Internal Energy - monoatomic or general ==

Is the derivation for the internal energy (under other thermodynamic parameters) correct for a diatomic gas? I would think that the 3/2 comes from the specific heat capacity at constant volume and makes the formula applicable for monoatomic gasses only. Would it not be correct to change this to c_V? I think so, but I'm not sure I've done the math correctly.  <small>—Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/85.81.85.32|85.81.85.32]] ([[User talk:85.81.85.32|talk]]) 11:01, 21 September 2007 (UTC)</small><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Radius of Atom ? ==

I don't understand why the volume of an atom is given as 4/3*pi* d**2, because d usually means diameter, and d = 2*r, so isn't this wrong? --[[User:Maye|maye]] ([[User talk:Maye|talk]]) 16:19, 6 December 2010 (UTC)

:ok it is later explained in 3.1, that the 'excluded' volume is not the same as the volume of a sphere. maybe one could improve the 3rd section in terms of structure? Make an introduction that is clearly independent of the different methods of derivation, explain required concepts (like the volume of a simple sphere), and then explain the derivation-dependent argumentation only in the respective sections? What do you think? --[[User:Maye|maye]] ([[User talk:Maye|talk]]) 16:24, 6 December 2010 (UTC)

The wikipedia page on the vdW radius defines the vdw volume = b/NA for monoatomic particles but this one accounts for excluded volume as well i.e. b/NA = 4*vdw volume. Can someone explain the difference?[[Special:Contributions/94.54.65.192|94.54.65.192]] ([[User talk:94.54.65.192|talk]]) 10:55, 6 October 2012 (UTC)

In the 
In the [[Van_der_Waals_equation#Conventional_derivation|conventional derivation section]] how do we go from:
:<math>b' = 4\pi d^3/3 = 8\times (4\pi r^3/3) \quad \rightarrow \quad b'=4\times (4\pi r^3/3)</math>,
to what they show on the wiki page for a [[Real_gas#van_der_Waals_model|real gas]]:
:<math>b=\frac{RT_c}{8P_c}</math>

[[lUser:S243a|S243a]] ([[User talk:S243a|talk]]) 14:38, 15 April 2013 (UTC)

You can't! The second part is a derivation (which has been include in text[[Special:Contributions/2604:2000:6069:3600:3D0E:2712:964E:2070|2604:2000:6069:3600:3D0E:2712:964E:2070]] ([[User talk:2604:2000:6069:3600:3D0E:2712:964E:2070|talk]]) 19:50, 25 July 2015 (UTC)wpd0101@gma[[Special:Contributions/2604:2000:6069:3600:3D0E:2712:964E:2070|2604:2000:6069:3600:3D0E:2712:964E:2070]] ([[User talk:2604:2000:6069:3600:3D0E:2712:964E:2070|talk]]) 19:50, 25 July 2015 (UTC)il.com.

== oscillations? ==

I can see no [[oscillation]]s in the [[PV diagram]], contrary to what the caption says.  --[[User:Yecril|Yecril]] ([[User talk:Yecril|talk]]) 09:12, 10 December 2013 (UTC)
:I think the caption is referring to the dips in pressure across some isotherms about 1/3 of the way from the left. As the volume is decreased, the pressure (oddly, so) drops and then increases sharply as expected. The [[Moiré pattern]]s don't help though. [[User:Tomásdearg92|Tomásdearg92]] ([[User talk:Tomásdearg92|talk]]) 10:56, 10 December 2013 (UTC)

== Confusing wording ==

In the [[Van_der_Waals equation#Derivation|conventional derivation paragraph]], in the second and third sentence the "bulk of particles" are particles near to the walls, and in the third sentence the "bulk of particles" are particles in the center of the container:<br />
"Further he assumed that the range of the attractive force is so small that the great majority of the particles do not feel that the container is of finite size. That is, the bulk of them have more attracting particles to their right than to their left when they are relatively close to the left-hand wall of the container. The same statement holds with left and right interchanged. Given the homogeneity of the fluid, the bulk of the particles do not experience a net force pulling them to the right or to the left. This is different for the particles in surface layers directly adjacent to the walls. They feel a net force from the bulk particles pulling them into the container, [...]"<br />
I'm going to delete the 2nd and third sentence, since the last sentence has the same content.--[[User:Skarmenadius|Skarmenadius]] ([[User talk:Skarmenadius|talk]]) 18:28, 22 January 2014 (UTC)

I've added some wording to indicate that this derivation does not follow from its assumptions. Pairwise additive intermolecular interactions preclude factoring the configurational partition function into the N'th power of the single particle partition function.

== Inset figure about oscillations ==
I don't have any relevant literature in front of me, so I feel uncomfortable editing the document to remove the offending sentence, but the caption to the figure showing vdW isotherms doesn't seem right:
  "The van der Waals isotherms: the model correctly predicts a mostly incompressible liquid phase,
  but the oscillations in the phase transition zone do not fit experimental data."
Unless there is a specific study to which someone is referring (e.g., someone actually measured data in the region between the spinodal points and got something other than what the van der Waals equation predicts), this is incorrect:  between the spinodal points (the "saddle" points, or the points at which dP/dV = 0), the slope of P vs V is positive, as predicted by the equation.  This means that the equation of state actually predicts that a fluid at those pressures with those densities would be unstable---stable thermodynamic systems always have d(-P)/dV > 0 or dP/dV < 0.  This is a correct prediction, and is not incompatible with experimental data---experimental data can only be collected for 'stable' fluids, as unstable systems are not observable.  [[User:Kaiserkarl13|Kaiserkarl13]] ([[User talk:Kaiserkarl13|talk]]) 21:43, 10 December 2014 (UTC)
: '''''I concur with your objection''''', and will add a {{cn}} tag. This was the original figure legend text, and I did not want to do a hard edit of it. When you have a source in hand, please (!) make the changes. Note, I have added sever good sources to further reading, to facilitate use of good sources, but any reputable review or text would be fine for this basic point. (See also next long section.) Cheers, Le Prof  [[Special:Contributions/71.201.62.200|71.201.62.200]] ([[User talk:71.201.62.200|talk]]) 15:39, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

== In re: major ongoing edits ==
I began some revisions to the article, starting with the lede, after finding that the lede did not represent what the article contained. The new lede is not yet perfect, but is better than what was there before.

I also placed tags because I found the sourcing to be in egregious violation of [[WP:VERIFY]] and clearly a case that would bring academic plagiarism charges—the content presented is widely available, but this does not excuse one from indicating ''which actual source was used in presenting the material''. No two derivations are identical, and readers deserve to know (and WP policies require that we say) which one or ones of the possible sources for the derivations were the actual one for this WP article.

In respons to the tagging, some editors have visited, and made rapid additions of sources, unfortunately, these have been to self-published or otherwise unacceptable scholarly sources (e.g., to Khan academy, an organization with whom I correspond, to address their online errors).
 
In response to the rush to put in sources, I argued at an editor's Talk page that ctations that go in:
* (1) should be solid, reputable, even esteemed secondary sources—graduate and better undergraduate physical chemistry text books like PW Atkins, journal review articles, and monograph review chapters, etc. 
* (2) should be entered ''fully and completely'' (not abbreviated, and not URL-only), so another editor does not have to come in after, to add missing citation elements, andcal const
* (3) ''Critically, when sourcing an article post hoc, the content needs to be checked against the source, very carefully.'' (As a Prof, I rarely find that the content can remain precisely the same, when adding a source that is not the actual source from which the material was originally drawn, see next Talk section.)

This is all wikipedia policy, see [[WP:SCICITE]], but it is also good research practice, and standard academic training to write about science. The quickly found web coverage—Khan academy, and ''self-published'' professor or student course information webpages—are '''''not''''' good or even acceptable science sources.

Finally, I have begun to add good sources to a '''Further reading''' section, and I urge other editors to do the same—share good finds in this '''Fr''' section, until each source is fully "tapped" (as in tapping a tree for syrup, i.e., "excerpted"), and until the article becomes a nominee for "Good Article".

Bottom line, slow down, make improvements that others will not have to fix. Cheers.  Le Prof  [[Special:Contributions/71.201.62.200|71.201.62.200]] ([[User talk:71.201.62.200|talk]]) 15:55, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

I need some clarification on the question of self-publishing. I've added the non-calculus derivation of the vdW a and b constants from the critical constants, and can reference my own writings, but the derivation stands on its own two feet (so to speak) of logic, and really needs no reference what so ever, i.e., the reader him/her self can tell that the derivation i correct is she/he knows algebra. Should it be "referenced"?[[Special:Contributions/2604:2000:6069:3600:3D0E:2712:964E:2070|2604:2000:6069:3600:3D0E:2712:964E:2070]] ([[User talk:2604:2000:6069:3600:3D0E:2712:964E:2070|talk]]) 19:47, 25 July 2015 (UTC)wpd0101@gmail.com

==Here is an example of what must change when unsourced text is reviewed against sources==
The following is an example of edits to the "Validity" section of this article, initiated after I simply tried complete an incomplete citation and remove a {{full}} tag.

I found the Terrell Hill (1960) source that was cited in the section, identified a modern reprint, and completed the citation, so that the information is now complete, and so that the source can now be found at an online book site with a "Look inside" feature.

I also read the corresponding pages: p. 280 appeared referencing the 1960, and I found the corresponding material on pp. 286-289 in the 2012 reprint. '''''Critically, in reviewing the material, I also found that the original writer:''
* did not draw all information from this source (so some {{cn}} tags have to remain), and
* did not accurately convey the cited authors views.'''
Specifically, Hill makes clear statements as to the the value of the equation, this was omitted in the earlier version, so this material was added to the paragraph and cited. At the same time, the earlier text's information that was more critical was located in Hill and so was retained, but changed in part to quote form, with the rest in a much closer paraphrase, without editorializing additions. (To finish the session, I also sourced another statement, that the theory was of use pedagogically, and added three text book examples.)

Here is the "diff", so one can compare before and after: [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Van_der_Waals_equation&type=revision&diff=668627568&oldid=668625337].

This is the sort of work that needs to be done in this article, in my opinion. '''''Bottom line, my tagging is not drive-by; the problems of this article are exhaustive—it needs being gone over sentence by unsourced sentence—and simply adding self-published sources at various points will not make it a good article.''''' In this one professional's opinion.  Le Prof  [[Special:Contributions/71.201.62.200|71.201.62.200]] ([[User talk:71.201.62.200|talk]]) 16:05, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

== Final comments and addition of expert needed tag ==

The call for an expert is to get someone whose first area and focus is PChem (not second or third, like mine). ''The reason for this tag's addition are given in the tag for all to consider,'' unless someone chooses to revert, and leave the article ''in appearance'', looking acceptable, rather than moving it ''in actuality'' toward being a good article. '''Reporting for Duty'''. As a retired Physical Chemist, with some expertise in this area, I've been adding to the material and attempting to correct some of it.
There is a problem in my mind, having to do with original derivations and sourcing them. I added a derivation which is, to my knowledge, original. How do I source it? An explanation of how original material is to appear here would be appreciated.

Note, before reverting the major edit on the Maxwell section, ''please attempt to read through what was there before'', here [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Van_der_Waals_equation&oldid=668633401]. There are incomplete sentences, and sentences that make little sense (to this practicing, professional, and teaching chemistry). This edit is not perfect, and the inline citations are annoying, but with the addition of a few references, and with review by a Stat Mech or other PChem expert, they all can go away. In the mean time, they mark the true status of the article, and indicate where editors with only a little time each day can apply effort.

Otherwise, a few final notes:
* The derivations remain all but [[WP:OR]] — no source is given for any one of them, as far as I can see.  ''The standard is not "Well anyone can find these if they just look… [not specifying where to look]."  It is to attribute the intellectual content of others, to those others, both because it is [[Charles_Lipson#Published_works|honest]], and because it assists readers in arriving at a true understanding of a subject.''
* I moved the Maxwell equal area section up, with its image, because it is more important than all the stray derivations that also appear.
* I grouped all the stray derivations together, under a major subheading, to follow the Maxwell discussion.
That is all, with this I pass this on to a physical chemist.  Le Prof  [Leprof_7272]  [[Special:Contributions/71.201.62.200|71.201.62.200]] ([[User talk:71.201.62.200|talk]]) 18:18, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
::Note, in final touchups to sources I was checking for broken URLs, and as a result came upon information that led me to delete a source. The citation attributed to Adrian Down is unacceptable. These are course notes from an academic course he is TAing, or has taken in the past. (Down was a UCal Berkeley undergrad and Duke graduate student, who puts all notes from courses taken and TA'd online.) This is not acceptable scholarly material here, especially given the fact that '''''the title subject, ''the van der Waals equation,'' is discussed in depth by eminent senior scholars''''' (as opposed to the next generation in training), '''''and these discussions appear in all of the best PChem text books in use''''', see '''Further reading'''. This self-published material by a trainee is just not acceptable sourcing ''anywhere''.  Le Prof  [[Special:Contributions/71.201.62.200|71.201.62.200]] ([[User talk:71.201.62.200|talk]]) 18:57, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

::: For these purposes, I qualify as a physical chemistry expert. The information in this article is generally accurate, including the "Maxwell construction". It merely lacks inline citations, and one section has improper tone. These problems are easy to fix!  We don't need to wikilawyer the [[Van der Waals equation#Maxwell equal area rule]] to death; for example, the "Essay-like" tag alone suffices. I would recommend Griffiths (for physicists) or Sandler (for engineers) as starting points for sources. Both are worthy of inclusion in the final article. —<span style="white-space: nowrap;font-family: Georgia, sans-serif;">[[User:wing gundam|<span style="color:#FF0000;">wing</span>]] [[User Talk:wing gundam|<span style="color:#0000FF;">gundam</span>]]</span> 17:10, 27 November 2015 (UTC)

: I made a first pass at editing the Maxwell construction section. For future reference, you '''grossly''' overtagged that section with inline messages. That many inline template messages dramatically reduces readability. Many phrases you tagged as cn (like "... free energy, a state variable, ...") do not require one, since a citation for that paragraph (which you also tagged) would presumably cover such an uncontroversial claim (in this context). And feel free to make edits yourself! —<span style="white-space: nowrap;font-family: Georgia, sans-serif;">[[User:wing gundam|<span style="color:#FF0000;">wing</span>]] [[User Talk:wing gundam|<span style="color:#0000FF;">gundam</span>]]</span> 18:50, 27 November 2015 (UTC)

==Notes on images, esp.  the precision of values offered in the '''Maxwell equal area rule''' image==
First, with regard to the pair of oscillation images in the '''Equation''' section—cannot the upper, complex, poorly explained image be deleted?

Second, the values of parameters given in the figure legend of the image in the '''Maxwell equal area rule''' section vary tremendously in their precisions—e.g. 0.9 vs 2.3488 vs. 0.64700.
---The 0.9 is really 0.9000000etc., i.e., a reduced temperature for an isotherm chosen as 9/10. The two volumes are computed, and their precisions are arbitrarily obtained using the spreadsheet's limits. Since there are no "real" gases which obey the vdW equation, this is more numerology than reality. wpd0101  <small><span class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Wpd0101|Wpd0101]] ([[User talk:Wpd0101|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Wpd0101|contribs]]) 12:53, 9 July 2015 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

How is this rigorous and physically informative? And is not stating PsubV is ''approximately'' equal to a number with 5 decimal places ending in two zeros either redundant (because the imprecision of the value is already implied by the last zero given), or just physically silly (to state something is approximate when stated to a precision of 1 part in 100,000)? 

It is not clear to me how these expressions reflect or promote clarity of thought, or understanding of the subject.  Le Prof  [[Special:Contributions/71.201.62.200|71.201.62.200]] ([[User talk:71.201.62.200|talk]]) 18:26, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

: And for that matter, the appearance of the image's position of VsubG is not consistent with the stated value, of ≈2.3, see figure legend for image, here, [[Van_der_Waals_equation#Maxwell_equal_area_rule]].  Le Prof  [[Special:Contributions/71.201.62.200|71.201.62.200]] ([[User talk:71.201.62.200|talk]]) 21:37, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

:: Significant figures are not a concern in this context. If the image itself is wrong, you should comment on its talk page, or better yet fix it yourself! —<span style="white-space: nowrap;font-family: Georgia, sans-serif;">[[User:wing gundam|<span style="color:#FF0000;">wing</span>]] [[User Talk:wing gundam|<span style="color:#0000FF;">gundam</span>]]</span> 18:30, 27 November 2015 (UTC)

==Note on the representation of the pressure variable==
In the article and images pressure is variously presented as lower ''p'' or upper case ''P'', and in each case, sometimes not italicised. This variable representation of the same parameter should be corrected when the further careful revisions are done—understanding that making text and images consistent is the longer term, harder objective.  Le Prof  [[Special:Contributions/71.201.62.200|71.201.62.200]] ([[User talk:71.201.62.200|talk]]) 21:34, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

I've tried to make it consistent, changing all the upper-case Ps to lower-case p, and adding italics.  A figure still needs to be edited to make everything consistent. [[User:ChristopherKingChemist|Christopher King]] ([[User talk:ChristopherKingChemist|talk]]) 21:17, 21 December 2015 (UTC)

== Source for the Statistical thermodynamics derivation ==

The given demonstration is that of this paper as far as I can tell:

Terrell L. Hill. Derivation of the complete van der Waals’ equation from statistical mechanics. Journal of Chemical Education, 25(6):347, 1948  <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Luc-j-bourhis|Luc-j-bourhis]] ([[User talk:Luc-j-bourhis#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Luc-j-bourhis|contribs]]) 20:14, 4 August 2017 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Article Introduction ==

The first sentence under section 1 seems like a better introductory sentence for the article than the current one. The current introduction seems stylistically wrong, and it's confusing that the first equation in a page about the van der Walls equation is not the van der Walls equation, but the ideal gas equation (the second equation is also not the van der Walls equation). Rather than focusing on an intuitive derivation, the introduction should explain succinctly what the vdw equation is. It's also confusing that the equations in the introduction reappear in section 2, but with the variables named differently! Note a vs a', b vs b'. I suggest that the introduction should be rewritten, ideally explaining what the new variables a and b represent, the first sentence of section 1 be moved into the introduction, and section 1 be renamed from "Overview and history" to "History". 

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== Inconsistent symbol v for volume per particle or per mole ==

In the section "Equation" the symbol <math>v</math> is defined as <math>N/V</math>, the number of particles divided by the volume of (available to) the gas, but in section "Derivation" <math>v</math> appears as a synonym of <math>V_\mathrm{m}</math>, the volume of one mole of the gas. This usage was introduced in an edit July 8, 2015 at 17:25 where the comment expresses the intention to use <math>v</math> for the molar volume.

This addition is unnecessary and does not clarify the issues. In the continuation of the section only <math>V_\mathrm{m}</math> is used.

Given the earlier definition of <math>v</math>, the formula should have been with Boltzmann's constant, not with the gas constant.
I suggest that the second equality is deleted.  <!-- Template:Unsigned --><small class="autosigned">—&nbsp;Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Cacadril|Cacadril]] ([[User talk:Cacadril#top|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Cacadril|contribs]]) 12:41, 3 September 2019 (UTC)</small> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

== Contradiction? ==
The regions of the isotherm from a–d and from c–e are interpreted as metastable states of super-heated liquid and super-cooled vapor, respectively.

super-heated and super-cooled on isotherm ??  [[User:Rwbest|Rwbest]] ([[User talk:Rwbest|talk]]) 07:31, 20 April 2020 (UTC)

No contradictions to be seen, this is a nomenclature that has been established so far. Though I would exclude those hyphens and leave them just superheated and supercooled instead. Probably the thing that's bugging you is how come they can be hot and cool at the same time. The reality is they refer to different states of matter but not different temperatures. Hence, what's considered a low-temperature vapor easily can be a high-temperature liquid, having the same absolute temperature whatsoever. [[User:Zomos|Zomos]] 14:04, 26 January 2022
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== Some feedback ==

Hello {{u|Airman72}}, thanks for all your improvements to the article since the last GA nomination. However, there are still various problems that could impede the current nomination:
* there are many unreferenced paragraphs. Examples are the paragraphs starting with {{green|"Once a and b are experimentally determined"}}, {{green|"For a single substance the definition of the molar"}}, {{green|"For a vdW fluid the molar Helmholtz potential"}}, and {{green|"The conclusion from all this work is that a"}}. According to criterion 2b, these and similar passages require inline citations "no later than the end of the paragraph".
* According to [[MOS:FIRST]], the first sentence should define the topic if it is definable. Maybe something along the line "The '''Van der Waals equation''' is a mathematical formula that describes the behavior of real gases."
* The first occurrence of "Van der Waals equation" should be bold per [[MOS:BOLD]]
* {{green|Second, its particles interact with one other}} replace "other" with "another"
* {{green|liquid--vapor phase change}} only use one hyphen
* {{green|in which two particles attracted in proportion to the product of their masses}} add "are" before "attracted"
* {{green|and although they are not not drawn in this figure}} remove one "not"
* {{green|they have a parabola like shape}} replace "parabola like" with "parabola-like"
* {{green|to determine a mollecular attraction}} replace "mollecular" with "molecular"
* {{green|vapor coexist in equlilbrium}} replace "equlilbrium" with "equlilibrium"
* {{green|The two methods of producing the coexistence surface are equivalent}} add "." at the end
* {{green|In he absence of experimental data}} replace "he" with "the"
* There are more spelling and grammar problems, so I suggest you use a spell checker
* The article has a readable prose size of 10537 words, which is a little above the recommended 8,000 per [[WP:SIZERULE]]. It might be justified given the breadth of the topic, but it would probably improve the article if you could find ways to make the article more concise.
[[User:Phlsph7|Phlsph7]] ([[User talk:Phlsph7|talk]]) 11:11, 13 December 2024 (UTC)

Hello, I came here looking for the Van der Waals equation and did not find it - neither easily, nor in its canonical form, as shown in the image of the building on which it is inscribed.  There is a reference to Van der Waals (1910), which leads nowhere. This article needs an introduction section, with the canonical form of the equation in the first paragraph. In addition, I think the article is far too long - we need an encyclopedia article, not a monograph.  I hate to say it, considering all the hard work that has been put in, but the version of 14Nov2023 seems preferable. [[User:Kbk|Kbk]] ([[User talk:Kbk|talk]]) 17:50, 3 January 2025 (UTC)

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== Trim warning ==

This is article is about 10k words of prose, that's too much. [[WP:Article size]] indicates it should be trimmed or split. What would be the best way to proceed? [[User:ReyHahn|ReyHahn]] ([[User talk:ReyHahn|talk]]) 14:09, 1 February 2025 (UTC)

:I have only briefly skimmed the article but I don't really see where you could split it. Even then, I'd much prefer tightening this article to creating another one that will likely languish at a low class. The equation isn't particularly niche or anything, but 
:A quick example: Just in the [[Van_der_Waals_equation#Summary]] section, there's two blockquotes that don't seem that necessary, and I question the need for that section at all. Another quote in the [[Van_der_Waals_equation#Stability]] section is 185 words long, when the point it's making could probably be summarised in half that. [[User:Sgubaldo|Sgubaldo]] ([[User talk:Sgubaldo|talk]]) 11:47, 2 February 2025 (UTC)

:: I also think significant trimming is probably the way to go.  The article is daunting due to its length and textbook-like exposition about how it impacts the analysis of other things, such as thermodynamics, free energy, etc., thus diminishing its readability.  A reference to an article in each topic area (e.g. an aspect of thermodynamics) with a short summary of how it relates would be more appropriate in this article.  This article needs only to point out the closeness of fit to the measured curves there to make the point, though having an analytical equation can simplify analysis.  —[[User_talk:Quondum|Quondum]] 13:10, 2 February 2025 (UTC)
::The article is thematically unified enough that a split would be awkward; there's no one section that really calls out, "I should be a separate article!". But there are lots of places within each section that could plausibly be trimmed. For example, do we really need to give the "reduced form" of all those equations? That's just rewriting the same equations in dimensionless variables, and it doesn't make them dramatically simpler or clarify their meaning. [[User:XOR&#39;easter|XOR&#39;easter]] ([[User talk:XOR&#39;easter|talk]]) 20:12, 2 February 2025 (UTC)
::: The "reduced form" should absolutely be removed everywhere in the article.  Articles should choose a single cohesive system of quantities and stick to it (unless the topic covers the conversion between such systems), and ''not'' do the legwork for students who might be confused about the conversion process between systems.  —[[User_talk:Quondum|Quondum]] 20:29, 2 February 2025 (UTC)
::: Looking a little more closely, this is normalization by some substance-dependant constants, and this allows the same graph to be drawn for all substances (at least that nominally).  There are two different sets of normalization constant used: the critical values (subscript 'c') and the so-called characteristic values (superscript '*')  Since the small constant factors become a little bewildering with the former, the graphs would be better expressed normalized by the latter.  I don't think the text needs to do more than define the characteristic constants (and express the critical values in terms of them).  —[[User_talk:Quondum|Quondum]] 20:58, 2 February 2025 (UTC)
::::The subsection surface plots could be eliminated. Although it was originally written to be the lead, the surface plots do not add much to the article and are somewhat repetitious. Further, the section Mathematical and empirical validity could also be eliminated. It was originally meant to replace a section that presented two pseudo-derivations as two derivations of the equation. It might better be left to a separate article.[[User:Airman72|Airman72]] ([[User talk:Airman72|talk]]) 22:11, 7 February 2025 (UTC)