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== Edit warring ==

AnaWitts, Could you please stop edit warring, as has been requested several times, both here and on your talk page. I have given two reasons already: 1. This isn't a source; 2. it falls into the bracket of trivia to some extent. It is also not linked to a reliable third-party source, but as it is of dubious notability, it probably not worth including anyway. I have no doubt someone else will remove it on any of the above grounds, and I strongly advise you to discuss if this should be included, rather than edit war. I also advise that you should read [[WP:BRD]] and [[WP:STATUS QUO]]. - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 12:21, 3 January 2019 (UTC)

== Erith and jurisdiction of coroner for West Kent ==

I haven't edited this sentence as I cannot view the 1878 Manchester Guardian article to see what it says. However, Erith would surely have been within the jurisdiction of Carttar. I found another article (Dundee Courier, 6 September 1878, p. 6) where the proceedings were reported and I think that when Carttar said that he was unsure whether some bodies were within his jurisdiction he must have been referring to bodies landed at or near North Woolwich (an exclave of Kent at that time). Some of these bodies might have been just over the border into Essex. Erith was in Kent at that time and nowhere near any border that would have affected jurisdiction of the coroner for West Kent, at least as far as I can tell. [[User:Dubmill|Dubmill]] ([[User talk:Dubmill|talk]]) 12:21, 26 January 2019 (UTC)
:Tweaked. - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 17:03, 26 January 2019 (UTC)
::I don't know whether the refs give any clarification, but on the highly tidal river some bodies are likely to have been recovered during following days at some distance from the scene. [[User:Davidships|Davidships]] ([[User talk:Davidships|talk]]) 14:25, 26 February 2019 (UTC)

== SS Bazalgette ==

It is stated in an image caption in Halliday’s ''The Great Stink'' that SS ''Bazalgette'' was withdrawn only in 1998, but this seems dubious to me. Looking at the photo, I found it hard to imagine that such an antiquated-looking vessel could have remained in service disposing of sewage sludge from the 1880s to 1998, which is over a hundred years (albeit with a refit in 1922). I did some Googling but could find only what appear to be repetitions of what is stated in the Halliday book. Surely there would have been a contemporary news report about such an old ship finally being withdrawn (i.e. in 1998), or photos from the 1960s–1990s of the boat either in port or on the Thames?

I have altered the wording to say that the practice of dumping sewage sludge in the North Sea ceased in 1998. This is mentioned in various sources, including the body text of Halliday (on the same page as the photo of the ''Bazalgette''), so the existing Halliday citation works for this. The following links support the idea that the boats in service at that time did not include the ''Bazalgette'':

''New Scientist'', 19 November 1987 ('Today, weather permitting, four boats will head down the River Thames towards the North Sea. These are the motor vessels Bexley, Hounslow, Newham and Thames ... Each vessel can carry 2300 tonnes of sewage sludge from East London’s sewage works.')

https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=mxyJfJnVy04C&pg=PA57&dq=%22Bovril+boats%22+%22Thames%22&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiN1smMt5HgAhWZRBUIHXIGDV4Q6AEIKTAA#v=onepage&q=%22Bovril%20boats%22%20%22Thames%22&f=false

Marine Treatment of Sewage and Sludge: Proceedings of the Conference, Institution of Civil Engineers, 1987 (In a section headed 'PRESENT OPERATION' it says: 'Four sludge vessels undertake a combined operation from Beckton and Crossness to the Barrow Deep disposal site ... in the outer Thames estuary.' It goes on to say: 'The three older vessels, MV Newham, MV Bexley and MV Hounslow, can carry 2300 tonnes. The newest of the fleet, MV Thames, can carry 2600 tonnes.')

https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=Bcxq2gjSGZ0C&pg=PA206&lpg=PA206&dq=%22MV+Bexley%22+%22Thames%22&source=bl&ots=lc6DJgUvXK&sig=ACfU3U2ZS53_6y0vx_zgcGtFmCFuC1PbkQ&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiGmYO0tpHgAhWEsnEKHTXxDi4Q6AEwAHoECAUQAQ#v=onepage&q=Bazalgette&f=false

[[User:Dubmill|Dubmill]] ([[User talk:Dubmill|talk]]) 10:58, 30 January 2019 (UTC)

:This is something I looked into when I re-wrote the [[Great Stink]] article: [https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=-NohCwAAQBAJ&pg=PA105&lpg=PA105&dq=%22SS+Bazalgette%22&source=bl&ots=1OIKpYuy1p&sig=ACfU3U0RMsCzQ6A4qreJg5yVe_Nml2dTMQ&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiXrKDFrJXgAhVQUBUIHdKaCBsQ6AEwEnoECAoQAQ#v=onepage&q=%22SS%20Bazalgette%22&f=false], [https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=QiGdMafoOUkC&pg=PA102&lpg=PA102&dq=%22SS+Bazalgette%22&source=bl&ots=dlUTboeAr8&sig=ACfU3U1RvPwZuYgVSPBgKG_MhyJGMCtbEg&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiXrKDFrJXgAhVQUBUIHdKaCBsQ6AEwEXoECAsQAQ#v=onepage&q=%22SS%20Bazalgette%22&f=false] and [https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=QiGdMafoOUkC&pg=PA102&lpg=PA102&dq=%22SS+Bazalgette%22&source=bl&ots=dlUTboeAr8&sig=ACfU3U1RvPwZuYgVSPBgKG_MhyJGMCtbEg&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiXrKDFrJXgAhVQUBUIHdKaCBsQ6AEwEXoECAsQAQ#v=onepage&q=%22SS%20Bazalgette%22&f=false] are all published sources. At the end of the day, it doesn't matter what anyone ''believes'' may or may not be true, it's what the reliable sources state. - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 11:04, 30 January 2019 (UTC)
:::It's moot now as the article's been revised, but for the record only one of those sources asserted that the same ship was still in service - the other(s) didn't (they are duplicates). [[User:Davidships|Davidships]] ([[User talk:Davidships|talk]]) 14:27, 26 February 2019 (UTC)
::Are the two sources I mention not reliable sources too? Do they not list the fleet of sludge boats in use on the Thames in 1987? Surely it is necessary to evaluate various sources and use judgement as to which to use. Do you personally think it is likely that a ship which looks like a museum piece could still have been working in 1998? When the sources conflict, creating at the very least doubt, in my opinion it is better to be conservative and in this case simply state that the practice ceased in 1998. [[User:Dubmill|Dubmill]] ([[User talk:Dubmill|talk]]) 11:21, 30 January 2019 (UTC)
:::What I "personally think" is neither here nor there: we have reported what the weight of reliable sources say. - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 11:25, 30 January 2019 (UTC)
:::: Miramar which is a reliable source gives that she was broken up in 1933. Behind a paywall but you can get a free 7 day ticket if you want to check https://www.miramarshipindex.nz/ship/1094298 [[User:Lyndaship|Lyndaship]] ([[User talk:Lyndaship|talk]]) 11:45, 30 January 2019 (UTC)
:::::Thanks Lyndaship - a reliable source that doesn't just miss it off a list, but states exactly what happened to it. I'll tweak accordingly. Cheers - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 11:48, 30 January 2019 (UTC)

== Requested move 3 February 2019 ==

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The result of the move request was: '''consensus to move''' the page to the requested title at this time, per the discussion below. [[User:Dekimasu|Dekimasu]]<small>[[User talk:Dekimasu|よ!]]</small> 21:44, 10 February 2019 (UTC)
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[[:SS Princess Alice (1865)]] → {{no redirect|Sinking of SS Princess Alice}} – At the current [[Wikipedia:Peer review/SS Princess Alice (1865)/archive1|Peer Review]] for this article, {{u|NoCOBOL}} has suggested changing the title of this article in line with similar events, such as [[Sinking of MV Sewol]]; {{u|KJP1}} has agreed with the rationale. Given the ''Princess Alice'' had an unremarkable history until it sank, this does seem to be a reasonable step, and one I support. [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 20:36, 3 February 2019 (UTC)
::{{u|Lyndaship}}, {{u|Dubmill}}, you have both been active recently on this article and this talk page. Do you have any thoughts on the proposed change of name? Cheers - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 08:44, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
*'''Support'''. The article is about the event with a bit of background about the vessel, the proposed title would better reflect that. [[User:Thryduulf|Thryduulf]] ([[User talk:Thryduulf|talk]]) 00:55, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
*'''Support''' that seems to be the primary topic of the article --[[User:DannyS712|DannyS712]] ([[User talk:DannyS712|talk]]) 08:32, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
*'''Support''' as it seems unlikely that any significant information will be available to expand the history of the ship and the major incident in its life was its sinking and aftermath [[User:Lyndaship|Lyndaship]] ([[User talk:Lyndaship|talk]]) 10:51, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
*'''Support''' The only thing that occurred to me is that altering the title might then make necessary some slight adjustment to the content to reflect the change of topic. For example, the section titled 'Service' could be changed to 'Background'. Also, in the article on the sinking of MV ''Sewol'' the lede contains only information on the sinking, with mention of the ship's history confined to the 'Background' section. I'm not saying that is the right way to do it but I did notice the difference. The brief mention in the lede of when the ''Princess Alice'' was built and where it previously operated is probably fine. [[User:Dubmill|Dubmill]] ([[User talk:Dubmill|talk]]) 11:21, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
::Yeah, I know it will need a bit of tweaking along the lines you've suggested. I'll move the details on the ''Bywell Castle'' up into the renamed section too, to balance it out. I've worked up a draft copy at [[User:SchroCat/sandbox]] of roughly what it'll be. It'll need a new IB too - Sewol has [[Template:Infobox event]]; [[Sinking of the RMS Titanic]] and [[Sinking of the RMS Lusitania]] have [[Template:Infobox news event]] (the latter of which I think now re-directs to the former), so we'd be best to switch over to that one. - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 11:30, 7 February 2019 (UTC)
:::As the main editor is happy with this I don't press the point, but I think the present title is the one people will Google. I'd really rather leave it where it is, though of course I'll go with the consensus. '''<span style="font-family:Trebuchet MS;">[[User:Tim riley|<span style="color:# 660066">Tim riley</span>]][[User talk:Tim riley|<span style="color:#848484"> talk</span>]]</span>''' 19:07, 8 February 2019 (UTC)
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== The Powder Magazine ==
The collision took place within sight of a Powder Magazine, formerly [[HMS Talbot (1824)]]. <ref>https://www.fold3.com/image/293580251 Reference</ref> [[User:Broichmore|Broichmore]] ([[User talk:Broichmore|talk]]) 14:32, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
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== Note needed? ==

Hi {{U|SchroCat}}, thanks for another fine article. I have a question... Carttar "focussed his proceedings on William Beechley, the first body to have been positively identified..." The verdict though, spells his name "death of the said William Beachey". Lock has ""45-year-old William Beechey" and "centre the whole case on Wiliam Beechey" (no L), but also quotes verdict "Beachey". Lock's index has "Beechey (Beachey), William". Thames Police Museum quotes the verdict with [http://www.thamespolicemuseum.org.uk/h_alice_12.html  "Beachy"]. Does article need a note re various spellings? [[User:JennyOz|JennyOz]] ([[User talk:JennyOz|talk]]) 18:19, 2 September 2019 (UTC)
:Hi {{u|JennyOz}}, yes, probably! I'll go over the sources again to see if there is something useful they have to say about it and pop it in tomorrow. Cheers - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 19:24, 2 September 2019 (UTC)
:Now added: Lock has something very brief, but it's good enough to cover what we say. Cheers - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 14:12, 3 September 2019 (UTC)
::Thank you {{U|SchroCat}}. [[User:JennyOz|JennyOz]] ([[User talk:JennyOz|talk]]) 15:04, 5 September 2019 (UTC)

== Grammar ==

In [[Sinking_of_SS_Princess_Alice#3_September_1878]], the phrasing "Harrison was unfamiliar with the conditions, so employed Christopher Dix ..." sounds awkward. I can see either "..., and so employed", or "..., so he employed", but as it stands I'm not sure it's grammatical. Even if it is, just by being unusual it made the text harder to read for me, and I would expect at least a few others. [[Special:Contributions/2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:11F2:723B:CAC4:ABD9|2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:11F2:723B:CAC4:ABD9]], do you have a reason for reverting (that part of) my edit? [[User:Semlet|Semlet]] ([[User talk:Semlet|talk]]) 09:55, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
:Yes. It's written in clear English that is clear, obvious and grammatically correct (none of the reviewers who went over the article with a fine-tooth comb for the PR and FAC flagged up a query, let alone a concern. I don't see anything awkward about it, but the additional words in there make it all rather clunky to read. - [[Special:Contributions/2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:11F2:723B:CAC4:ABD9|2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:11F2:723B:CAC4:ABD9]] ([[User talk:2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:11F2:723B:CAC4:ABD9|talk]]) 11:25, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
::It was not actually all that clear to me. The footnote clarifies that Dix was employed specifically for that trip, not just employed in general, which was not obvious to me from the main text. As for the pronoun, surely adding just the word "he" wouldn't make it ''less'' clear, obvious, or grammatically correct? If it would make it ''more'' so for even a few people, shouldn't it be done? [[User:Semlet|Semlet]] ([[User talk:Semlet|talk]]) 13:25, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
:::We cover the point nicely enough without any unnecessary changes. Sure, it doesn’t make it less clear, but it doesn’t make it any more clear, just clunky. Less is more, just as Orwell advised. [[Special:Contributions/2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:DB:F2BE:4807:9420|2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:DB:F2BE:4807:9420]] ([[User talk:2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:DB:F2BE:4807:9420|talk]]) 14:47, 3 September 2022 (UTC)

==Redlink for Bywell Castle==
The redlink for {{SS|Bywell Castle|1870}} has twice been removed by IP editors. I did revert one removal, so in order to avoid an [[WP:EW|edit war]] I'm invoking the D part of [[WP:BRD]].

The link has been removed on the grounds that the ship isn't notable enough to sustain an article. I say that she is. We know that she was built in 1870. Apart from her involvement in the ''Princess Alice'' disaster, she went missing in January 1883. Her name is sufficiently uncommon that it should be able to discover her history during her thirteen years of service. So, the question is should the redlink be restored? [[User:Mjroots|Mjroots]] ([[User talk:Mjroots|talk]]) 10:20, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
:Hi {{ping|Mjroots}}. When I did the research for the article there was virtually nothing available about the ship. She was a coal hauler that had a rather boring existence except the two events of the ''Princess Alice'' and being sunk in a storm. That's it, as far as all the sources I saw. I'm happy to be proven wrong, but it would probably be best to do the research to see what there is before the links are re-added. Cheers - and I hope you're keeping well. The editor formally known as SchroCat, editing from [[Special:Contributions/2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:11F2:723B:CAC4:ABD9|2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:11F2:723B:CAC4:ABD9]] ([[User talk:2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:11F2:723B:CAC4:ABD9|talk]]) 11:20, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
::[http://www.tynebuiltships.co.uk/B-Ships/bywellcastle1870.html Tynebuiltships] has a page on her. [[User:Mjroots|Mjroots]] ([[User talk:Mjroots|talk]]) 11:25, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
:::So does the Miramar Ship Index (with pretty much the same information), but I'm not sure that's not enough for an article. [[Special:Contributions/2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:11F2:723B:CAC4:ABD9|2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:11F2:723B:CAC4:ABD9]] ([[User talk:2A00:23C7:2B86:9801:11F2:723B:CAC4:ABD9|talk]]) 11:29, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
{{od}} article now at {{SS|Bywell Castle|1869}}. [[User:Mjroots|Mjroots]] ([[User talk:Mjroots|talk]]) 20:05, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
:''Bywell Castle'' is called a collier here, but according to {{SS|Bywell Castle|1869}} she also carried loads like cotton, beans and cotton seed. So, wouldn't "bulk carrier“ be more accurate? --[[User:Jossi2|Jossi]] ([[User talk:Jossi2|talk]]) 11:38, 3 September 2023 (UTC)
::No. She was a collier at the time of the crash. This is also a reflection of the sources. - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 11:44, 3 September 2023 (UTC)

== RNLI lifeboats  ==

@[[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] you reverted my [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sinking_of_SS_Princess_Alice&oldid=1173579622 good faith edits] - I think the point about the RNLI lifeboats are worth including - that they were not introduced to the river until 2002 seems relevant in a section marked "Consequences and later events" with wording about "avoid[ing] future tragedies". Even noting that Lifeboats were not consequently introduced on the river would be relevant, imo.

(I'm aware that the Marchioness is unrelated to this event, that was merely background info to the lifeboat introduction - although I do think it's worth noting that the subsequent disaster on the river was because of a collision between two vessels...) [[User:Turini2|Turini2]] ([[User talk:Turini2|talk]]) 14:05, 3 September 2023 (UTC)
:It’s a gap of 124 years and no connection between the two. If the RNLI had said ‘because of Marchioness and Alice, we’re installing a station’, that’s one thing, but not everything that happens after something is connected. - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 14:28, 3 September 2023 (UTC)

==Recent changes==

{{U|SchroCat}}: despite the article's FA status, due to good work by many editors including yourself, it was still jumbled, particularly with respect to the High Court action. I made a set of changes to remedy these things and gave reasons for the main changes. You reverted the whole bunch, calling that just a 're-sort'; no indication of why you thought my changes were mistaken.

Now you have re-reverted me, complaining:  "Dummy edit: if you could use the talk page to explain the changes, that may be beneficial. Structural changes to an FA need better explanation than already provided, or - ideally - a discussion before doing them". What is a 'better explanation' is a matter of opinion, but I would appreciate an expression of opinion on the appropriateness of my changes. [[User:Errantios|Errantios]] ([[User talk:Errantios|talk]]) 07:10, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
:Errantios, The problem is that you didn't give a reason in your edit summaries for ''why'' you were making the changes and what you were trying to achieve. They simply describe what you did, which isn't an explanation. In your edit summaries it was completely unclear what you were doing with "Mansion House fund clarified", "High Court action distinguished" and "added High Court finding", except with the last of the three. Could you explain the rationale behind the edits - hopefully we can come to an agreement on what would be best changed and what left alone? Thank you. - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 07:33, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
::I have followed [[WP:ES]] as I understand it{{mdash}}that an edit summary should state what the edit is about and that no more is needed if the reason for the edit is evident from the edit itself. You have not followed [[WP:ES]] where it says: "Editors should not revert an otherwise good edit because of a missing or confusing edit summary". I will leave this here: if my edits were useful, someone else can now make them. [[User:Errantios|Errantios]] ([[User talk:Errantios|talk]]) 11:46, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
:::Helpful summaries explain, and the changes across a stretch of the article need explanation (you can take this that the ''reason'' for the edits were not evident for me and the question of whether they were "good" edits or not is not clear without an explanation). If you could please explain the rationale, then we can discuss further. Thanks - [[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] ([[User talk:SchroCat|talk]]) 11:53, 5 September 2023 (UTC)

== The name of the Helmsmen ==

@[[User:SchroCat|SchroCat]] the only source given for this information is a recent book, the newspaper is literally first hand contemporaneous reporting. I can provide more newspapers if needed. How many would you like?

Further to that I could also provide you with Birth and Death Certificates, for all the decedents of John Eyers up to and including my Mother who herself was an "Eyers" and not an Ayers. If that would be proof enough of the name to stop your needless reversions even if not good enough for a source. [[User:Leftred|Leftred]] ([[User talk:Leftred|talk]]) 20:21, 26 September 2023 (UTC)
:{{u|Leftred}}, firstly, as you are new, you should note that [[WP:EDIT WARRING]] is a complete no-no, particularly on an article graded FA (the ones with the gold start at the top). If you intend to do more edits here, then that's probably the biggest policy you need to get used to. Discussion on a talk page (like you are doing here) is the only thing to do once your edit has been reverted. There is a guideline at [[WP:BRD]] that outlines the Bold-Revert-Discuss process that people should follow to avoid edit warring. A warning: edit warring can lead you to being blocked if you keep doing it, which isn't in anyone's best interests.{{pb}}Now the boring lecture bit is over, welcome to Wikipedia, I hope you stay and work on anything of interest - literally the world of knowledge is there for you to add to if there is something of interest.{{pb}}Thank you for highlighting the problem with the name. I've run some other searches on other contemporary sources, and they back up what you are saying, so I will just tweak what you have added a little to fit in with the consistency of the text and citation format. One small point on the birth and death certificates, we would not be allowed to use these on their own as the basis for any change - that would breach the [[WP:Original research]] rules we have on sourcing, but as we have [[Wikipedia:Reliable sources|reputable published sources]] from the contemporary news sources, these are great to use (and that's another policy you need to get to grips with for future editing!) Cheers