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These are pages I found, often through RC patrol, that need to be edited. Perhaps some of them I should put in Wikipedia:Cleanup. The common criteria for them is that fixing them will take longer than an average fixup takes. They will stay here from the time I find them, until I have time to fix them.

  • Cleopatra (band) - from the first sentence I'm confused. "Cleopatra is a musical group from the UK comprising three sisters Cleopatra also know as Cleo, Yonah, and Zainam Higgins." What does that mean, the sisters are all named Cleopatra? Should there be a period between the word sisters and Cleopatra? I have to do independent (Google) research of the band and fix up this page I found while on RC patrol.
  • Sringeri Sharada Peetham - a page put up by someone for who English is probably a second language. In the history section it talks about the appearance of a goddess, have to make sure it says something like "The sacred texts say that the goddess appeared" or something like that.
  • Sisters Minor of Mary Immaculate - a page I NPOV'd and should fill out more on.