Wiki143 talk:Wikipedia Signpost/2005-01-10/QuakeAID

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POV

In my view this article reveals extreme POV. Use of phrases like "Shadowy Organization" are reminiscent of yellow journalism. If you intend to run a Blog or conventional online newspaper, please do so off Wikipedia space, otherwise please try to conform to NPOV. --Tony Sidaway|Talk 17:52, 11 Jan 2005 (UTC)

I'm open to suggestions for a better adjective than "shadowy". Keep in mind that the lead sentence sort of summarizes the information that is to come later in the article. There's a difficult balance to strike between writing things so that people will find them interesting to read about, and just giving a bland list of facts. --Michael Snow 19:48, 11 Jan 2005 (UTC)
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